Tuesday, September 16, 2008
the only one working
"To day was a bad day because I was the only oone working I was hunting for food, will evry one els is sitting around doing nothing it is so gay". "Also on top of all of that stuff I dident even get the pig I was hunting, I wounded it but my spear fell out". Tomarrow I am going to find a heavier peac of wood and make the tip allot sharper,...........tomarrow that pig is going to be bacon".
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Nathan the blogs looking awesome so far, on the next one lets add some length, it should be about 3 paragraphs. Also, make sure you use the vocabulary in your writing, if you forgot the words you can check out my DP and there are examples there.
Nathan~
I really like how you focused on the one topic of Jack trying to catch the pig. One thing that you may want to improve on is checking your grammar, punc. and spelling. Also, don't forget to add in the vocabulary words from the chapter.
~Simone
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